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A Vein for a Knife
Contributed by
WorthlesSanity666
on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 04:57:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Depression swallows
Destruction consumes
The future is hallow
from any view.
Yearning for change
of this redundant life.
Willing to exchange
a vein for a knife.
Copyright ©
WorthlesSanity666
... [
2004-10-13 16:57:16]
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Re: A Vein for a Knife
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 05:00:20 PM AEST
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| excellent write. short and powerful. written well. i wish this was longer though. =/ well i hope you have a better day tomorrow, but it seems like it wouldnt take much to make it better. |
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Re: A Vein for a Knife
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by Carli on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 05:03:14 PM AEST
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| I like the abrupt and brutal honesty in this. It's sharp. |
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Re: A Vein for a Knife
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 05:42:25 AM AEST
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| i love it! str8 & 2 the point, its great! |
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