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Untitled
Contributed by
tormentedpixie
on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 03:17:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Trust,
You think you know someone.
Then they change.
You begin to trust them,
Then you see the real person.
The one who decieves you.
Lies to you,
Tries to trick you.
But, wait, it does work.
You know the person,
Know their ways.
They fail.
You know better.
How can you even begin to describe how you're feeling?
You trusted them.
Not any more.
Never again.
You thought you were their friend.
Friends? Yeah.
Friends don't do that to one another.
Friends have each others back.
They can't be a friend.
A friend doesn't...
Couldn't...
Wouldn't...
Put you through the things they did.
What kind of friend are they?
Not the kind I want.
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tormentedpixie
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2004-10-13 15:17:36] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by theMoth on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 03:28:52 PM AEST (User
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TRUST
would be a good title
for this.
Or even
(NOT) THE KIND I WANT...
there are some other lines in
your poem that would work.
--Mothy |
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