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Hamlet's Dilemma
Contributed by
theraven
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Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 09:51:44 AM in AEST
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To love, or love with haste;
a simple, yet taunting riddle from Shakespeare
himself that turns my mind to waste.
With your implying eyes and sly lips
come a glow, a soft radiance near
the surface, like a lonely snowflake
that falls forever before disappearing.
Your gentle touch and melodious
voice keep me from fading into
the shadows; away from the void.
Posing a cool decorum with a teasing
smile relieves me from the grips of reality,
freeing me, inspiring my thoughts.
So i await with my feelings aside for
a chance to match your tenderness;
for as special things come in small packages,
with patience, all good things come in time.
-The Raven-
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Re: Hamlet's Dilemma
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 10:39:18 AM AEST
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a lovely write, very true the last line,
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Re: Hamlet's Dilemma
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 04:25:01 PM AEST
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| great write,i love this one |
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Re: Hamlet's Dilemma
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 02:50:05 AM AEST
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a very deep and pondering write, granted it's 3 am here. well raven old chap, i have to say i loved everything about this poem. you certainly know how to write excellent poetry!!!!!!! i am truly looking forward to becoming a loyal reader and fan of yours. peace and love,
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