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Why My Heart Is Cold
Contributed by
UnlovedChild
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Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 02:44:26 AM in AEST
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My heart has never been broken
Tears i never have cried
I've hidden inside myself
Hoping to end this pain
I can never seem to hide
If you ask me why my heart is cold
It's because it has never felt warmth
Why wont this endless pain leave me alone
Always inside of me waiting to break through
Waiting to break me and shatter my heart
Leaving it cold and alone with not one ounce of love
With a heart so cold and watery eyes
It's a shame that no one is here
Comforting me and helping me relieve my pain
If only there was a cure I could find
I would immediately grasp it and never let go
Filling up my heart with love and changing who I am
So ask me once more why my heart is cold
You know the answer so why ask
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UnlovedChild
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2004-10-13 02:44:26]
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Re: Why My Heart Is Cold
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by Kie-Kie on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 02:55:15 AM AEST
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Beautiful write sissy...what did I tell you? See you can write *hugs*
Love ya,
~Kiela~ |
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Re: Why My Heart Is Cold
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by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 01:44:31 PM AEST
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Beautiful write... yes u can write... well expressed emotions... I Loved It!
Keep writing...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Why My Heart Is Cold
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 02:56:05 AM AEST
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beautiful expression of feelings:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Why My Heart Is Cold
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by Rxqueen on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 06:59:48 AM AEST
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| AW, what a sad poem. You will find the warmth you seek one day, never give up sweetness! Good poem! |
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Re: Why My Heart Is Cold
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by xXAgainTwiceXx on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 08:35:03 PM AEST
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Awesome write, keep it up! I'd love to see more.
xXAgainTwiceXx |
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Re: Why My Heart Is Cold
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 02:15:51 AM AEST
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Aww this is really sad Amy, i can relate to your feelings very well and for a 15 year old this is to much. hope everything goes well with you and never give up.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: Why My Heart Is Cold
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 12:59:53 AM AEST
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| this is the furst of your works that I can realy relate too. Well done. |
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