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Haiku
Contributed by
Kie-Kie
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Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 11:08:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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~Night~
The night dank and dark
Holds secrets form the world, thoughts
No one tells a soul
~Twilight~
Twilight so serene
The sky in shades of blue, to
Calm the mind and soul
~Life~
Life so dull and gray
Must live through it yet again
As time fades on by
~School~
School bells ring aloud
Pushing my way through the crowd
To get home from school
Copyright ©
Kie-Kie
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2004-10-12 23:08:59]
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Re: Haiku
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 11:46:09 PM AEST
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Very good works.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Haiku
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 12:12:47 AM AEST
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| Beautifully written and a cool poem, and you are not weird, you write really emotional wrtes and they are so cool to read. |
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Re: Haiku
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by Ronald on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 03:44:26 AM AEST
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| A very unique poem I must say. A wonderful way of writing a poem :-) That's good! |
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Re: Haiku
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by Hurretje on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 04:56:46 AM AEST
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Very nice series and good peeks into your life!
Hugs,
Hur |
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Re: Haiku
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by brew on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 08:22:32 AM AEST
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| It worked, and flowed with each a differ meaning. Liked all.......~ |
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Re: Haiku
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 08:48:15 AM AEST
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Excellent poem Kie different yet wonderful
Love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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Re: Haiku
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 10:58:56 AM AEST
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very good haikus, I loved em :)
pixie xx |
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Re: Haiku
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 12:24:58 PM AEST
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Each piece is uniquely well done,
however all 4 seem to create a theme as well.
Nice job! |
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Re: Haiku
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 10:56:53 PM AEST
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| excellent haikus =] |
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Re: Haiku
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th January 2009 @ 05:56:15 PM AEST
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They're really good, Kiela. Haiku is sometimes makes it hard to express one's self. You made it look easy.
Take care,
Tim |
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