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a spirit
Contributed by
ll
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Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 11:06:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Are you aware of what
You make me feel
Now I feel so invisible to you
Like I’m not real
Didn’t you notice the lock around me
I was left to cry
I started waiting until I decided
Why should I care
Then you started appearing
You looked at me
As if you were being tortured
A tear drops from your eyes
I start to get confused
I started to realize
That it’s true
How I’m truly not real
I see you
But you don’t see me
I’m just a spirit flying around
Looking through your heart
Copyright ©
ll
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2004-10-12 23:06:59]
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Re: a spirit
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 12:08:25 AM AEST
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| A real sad write, so emotional and with feelings galore, an awesome poem written well. |
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Re: a spirit
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by jeannoh on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 03:50:51 AM AEST
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I know what its like to feel invisable
you did a wonderful job expressing
how you feel...good words
flows easy
good read
thank you for sharing
when I know its not easy to share
sad feelings sometimes
thanks again
Jeannoh |
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Re: a spirit
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by AnastasiaN on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 05:51:09 PM AEST
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| i like how you incorporate a bunch of song lyrics into your poems...it makes it sound really original....yah right. |
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Re: a spirit
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 04:25:12 PM AEST
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| Great write! I've felt this way before. |
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