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On Thin Ice
Contributed by
lanna047
on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 10:33:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I look around this place
and hate the sights I see
the shambles my room is in
mimics what is inside of me
that life I thought I'd have
I feel myself drift away
the list of flaws I see in me
grows longer with every day
this feeling deep inside
desperately wants me to know
the different person I can be
and how things really should go
but harsh lessons I have learned
that have built up over the years
have emptied me of courage
and filled me up with fears
it has gotten to the point
where I'm sure to lose my grip
I've stumbled onto thin ice
it's inevitable that I will slip
and then I will fall through
into the frigid waters below
but the reality of it is
no one would ever know
Copyright ©
lanna047
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2004-10-12 22:33:29]
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Re: On Thin Ice
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 10:46:04 PM AEST
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| great write. |
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Re: On Thin Ice
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by Ronald on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 03:48:31 AM AEST
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| This is an amazingly well-written poem. Thanks for sharing you poetry skills with us :-) |
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Re: On Thin Ice
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 04:52:00 AM AEST
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| i love it |
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Re: On Thin Ice
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by athena on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 07:26:19 PM AEST
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::tears:: i really really love it
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