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Faded Dreams
Contributed by
Understood
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Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 09:36:31 PM in AEST
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Faded dreams never to be
Lost memories faded into nothing
Hopes to see you one more time
Together the world was ours
Great barriers fell from our conquests
Now dreams are marked with a stone
Why did you have to leave?
I want to say just one more thing
Without warning you were gone
Wish that this nightmare will end
Nothing can destroy a person like losing a friend
Copyright ©
Understood
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2004-10-12 21:36:31]
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Re: Faded Dreams
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by PumpkinPie on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 09:44:17 PM AEST
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I'm deeply sorry for your loss,and that last verse was so sad to read,it brought back memories of a friendship between a friend and I destroyed by a car accident.Your friend is watching over you,pray for her soul,
PumpkinPie
Well written pain in each verse,your write was appreciated. |
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Re: Faded Dreams
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 09:52:18 PM AEST
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| written with excellence. your last stanza was a powerful ending. |
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