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Have You Ever
Contributed by
tractorbabe
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Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 09:35:30 PM in AEST
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hbadday
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Have you ever
Been so far
So far that you
Could touch the star
Have you ever
Felt the pain
That you get
When it rains
Have you ever
Tried to see
All the hurt
Your causing me
And even when
The sun comes out
The pains still here
With out a dought
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2004-10-12 21:35:30]
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Re: Have You Ever
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 09:53:49 PM AEST
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| very ncie third stanza. i think your meant doubt and not dought? |
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Re: Have You Ever
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by Rxqueen on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 08:51:55 AM AEST
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| Oooh, I liked that one. It was short and oh so sweet. Good job! |
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