|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Pain inside
Contributed by
pyro_88
on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 08:30:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
|
I can't stop the pain thats inside.
Its eating me alive.
I call you up to talk about it.
But you dont answer.
I leave a message on your cell.
But you dont call back.
Do you hate me now?
Now that i need someone so bad.
I can't go through life like this anymore.
Yesterday i tried to kill myself.
All i could think about was how it would make you feel.
I want to die so bad.
Will i ever feel real?
When will this ***** end?
Cause its tearing me apart.
I can't help it anymore.
I'm already dead.
I just havn't pulled the trigger.
Copyright ©
pyro_88
... [
2004-10-12 20:30:33]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Pain inside
(User Rating: 1 )
by BrandySwanson on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 09:07:02 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I could feel your pain in this write. So very sad but written well great job take care and please don't pull the trigger ok? We all would miss you on here not speaking of how your family would miss you even more.
Brandy |
|
|
Re: Pain inside
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jenn2004 on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 09:55:36 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I feel your pain, but nobody is worth taking your life over, |
|
|
Re: Pain inside
(User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 09:58:12 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
i know this pain all too well....i know how badly it sux...great write tho
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
|
|
Re: Pain inside
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 10:12:31 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| amazing write. powerful and heart wrenching. you showed your talent very well. |
|
|
Re: Pain inside
(User Rating: 1 )
by Quilted_rag_doll on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 03:05:09 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
wow...very good! i liked it much!
I'm already dead.
I just havn't pulled the trigger.
i just loved that lil piece! awesome work!
nicely written!
¤~::.. a n d e ..::~¤ |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
