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You Kissed Me!
Contributed by
Hopeless_Romantic
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Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 06:51:36 PM in AEST
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You kissed me!
My head drooped low on your breast
With a feeling of shelter and infinite rest
While the holy emotions my tongue dared not speak
Flashed up as in flame from my heart to my cheek
Your arms held me fast; oh! Your arms are so bold
Heartbeat against heart in their passionate fold
Your glances seemed drawing my soul thru mine eyes
As the sun draws the mist from the sea to the skies
Your lips clung to mine till I prayed in my bliss
They might never unclasp from the rapturous kiss
You kissed me!
My heart, my breath and my will
In delirious joy, for a moment, stood still
Life had for me then no temptations, no charms
No visions of rapture outside of your arms
And were I this instant an angel possessed
Of the peace, and the joy that belong to the blest
I would fling my white robes unripiningly down
I would tear from my forehead its beautiful crown
To nestle once more in that haven of rest
Your lips upon mine, my head on your breast
You kissed me!
My soul in a bliss so divine
Reeled and swooned like a drunkard when foolish with wine
And I thought 'twere delicious to die there, if death
Would but come while my lips were yet moist with your breath
While your arms clasped around me in that blissful embrace
While your eyes melt in mine could e'en death e'er efface
Oh these are the questions I ask day and night:
Must my lips taste no more such exquisite delight?
Would you wish that your breast were my shelter as then?
And if you were here, would you kiss me again?
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Re: You Kissed Me!
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by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 06:57:41 PM AEST
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| Excellent. I absolutely love it. |
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Re: You Kissed Me!
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 07:12:17 PM AEST
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A very moving, strong, emotional write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: You Kissed Me!
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by emocutie07 on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 09:23:46 PM AEST
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| aww, I thought this was one of the most ahdorable heart fluttering writings..Ive ever read... would la la loove to read more from ya...keep up the good work |
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Re: You Kissed Me!
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 09:07:55 AM AEST
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A magnificent write.
Oh the passion in this kiss it was breathtaking i felt every word you wrote.
Very well done excellent
love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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Re: You Kissed Me!
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by poetryman30 on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 01:55:24 PM AEST
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Well, if t'were me, I would kiss you a thousand times..:-)
This is such a romantic piece of classic writing. What man could resist.
You ARE a hopeless romantic...but, you are in good company.
Another beautiful piece...PM30 :-) |
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Re: You Kissed Me!
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 05:50:07 PM AEST
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Sigh.... Wonderfully written!! Such passion and emotions flowing thru this write..... Keep up the good work....
Jenni
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Re: You Kissed Me!
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by lovesucks on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 11:55:13 PM AEST
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| breathtaking.... |
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Re: You Kissed Me!
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by cuddlytiger17 on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 05:27:52 PM AEST
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this is yet another breathtaking piece you've written. It takes a true artist to be able to create the effect you have. I was totally caught up in the poem, every word and every emotion. You've won yourself a huge fan here. I'll defintely be checking back to see more. :)
~ann marie~ |
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Re: You Kissed Me!
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by cuddlytiger17 on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 05:32:59 PM AEST
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| Oh and btw, I'd like to kick whoever rated this poem less than a 5! |
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Re: You Kissed Me!
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 11:07:18 PM AEST
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Absolutely exquisite!
Oh! I could ramble on and on... but you must know how terrific this is! THIS is exactly (I suspect, I think) the type of write that leaves the author sighing when they put down the pen... because they know, immediately, that something rather perfect has fallen onto the page.
Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. How I wish... WISH... I was similarly inspired!
SNM |
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