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Lies
Contributed by
Understood
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Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 05:54:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Pressured by World
Seen as Perfect
Envy of Others
Loved by Most
Still not Enough
Is there More?
Stare at Sky
Think about Question
Is there Hope?
Dream of Dreams
Face is Covered
Hope was Denied
Time is Up
Nothing is Left
People now Hate
No love Left
Copyright ©
Understood
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2004-10-12 17:54:58]
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Re: Lies
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by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 06:15:51 PM AEST
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| Excellent job. |
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Re: Lies
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 06:23:13 PM AEST
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| excellent. short and to the point. powerful. |
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Re: Lies
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 05:59:39 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, This site does have submission rules, understood . . ?
If you stick to them, you'll get more people reading and commenting like me. If you don't want to participate because you think everyone doesn't want your honest opinion / criticism, then critique mine instead.
Nice poem. Am looking forward to your contributions in future.
Keep writing. |
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