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Shadow
Contributed by
Exodus-On-Life
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Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 05:11:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Blue sky and I'm twisted.
Sitting beneath a shadow of fate.
I had a long talk with the shadow.
Suppressed the suffering and released the hate.
We took a walk then without you.
My confidence dancing upon the tip of a pin.
I invited you to come dance along.
But, it was you who decided not to in the end.
You decided to walk away from me.
Right across the field and into the wood.
I watched your beauty fade into nothing.
And your beauty was once something that never could.
But, burned the bridges have you.
Built some new path to go along.
You shall always carry my shadow with you.
That which you stole with you and have kept for so long.
But, from the shadow I once talked with...
And all those times you will sit alone in tears and in dismay.
I will always remember walking...
And that shadow will always just fade away.
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Re: Shadow
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by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 10:09:39 PM AEST
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I like this alot...great work....awesome poem
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Re: Shadow
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by TheTangibleGhost on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 01:11:29 AM AEST
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Great Poem. The rhyming and flow are perfect. Keep writing
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