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Tell Me The Truth

Contributed by savedbydeath on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 04:37:57 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



tell me how you feel
was this ever real
i've been missed
and i've been dissed

why cant you tell me
why arent i allowed to see

(chorus)
tell me the truth
is this really you
tell me the truth
give me the truth
tell me the truth

you've got me so confused
i feel used
i'm lost
ohh i'm so lost

(chorus)
tell me the truth
is this really you
tell me the truth
give me the truth
tell me the truth

why arent i allowed to see
why cant you tell me

tell me the truth (x4)

i'm crying
while you're sitting lying
i feel i'm dying
ohh i feel i'm so dying

tell me the truth(x3)
give me the truth(x2)

i dont care no more
i'm now shutting the door
i'm crying on the cold floor
i dont care anymore

i was blind
now you're stuck on my mind
i was just a child
a child gone wild

you cheated on me
is that why
i couldnt see
could you see me cry

(chorus)
tell me the truth
is this really you
tell me the truth
give me the truth
tell me the truth

you cant you tell me
why arent i allowed to see

a waste of five
months,you brought me to life
but now i pick up the knife
and cut this black line

tell me the truth(6){slowly fades lower and lower}




Copyright © savedbydeath ... [ 2004-10-12 16:37:57]
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Re: Tell Me The Truth (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 04:46:44 PM AEST
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This is good. Your chorus could use some work though your word choice throws the song off from my point of view.


Re: Tell Me The Truth (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 05:02:06 PM AEST
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It's very straight-forward.
As it goes on it seemed to get
more insistent and convincing.

--Mothy


Re: Tell Me The Truth (User Rating: 1 )
by Yousef on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 05:21:26 PM AEST
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Good lyrics, I liked the idea of "Why can't you tell me" as it truely represents the cowardliness of this guy as he THINKS he's man enough by cheating on you but he's not man enough to tell you!! Good effort and keep it up.


Re: Tell Me The Truth (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenn2004 on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 09:59:14 PM AEST
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Good song, but u could do a little work on the chorus part next time. No guy is worth killing yourself over.


Re: Tell Me The Truth (User Rating: 1 )
by cheech on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 02:37:13 PM AEST
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wow good stuff rodney!hows it going?hope everything is going fine,everything up here is alright...i guess.anyways i really lliked this song,i dont think the chorus needs any work.hopefully the guy that cheated on u knows how stupid that was to do.man rodney ur a very special girl y let guys like that in ur life,move on,move right on,take care love ya lots and we're all missen ya so hurry the f*ck up!

cheech


Re: Tell Me The Truth (User Rating: 1 )
by booboo on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 02:46:19 PM AEST
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awsome lyrics!i think they were great,where are you anyways?i know you're somewhere writting songs,how long have u been gone for?are you having fun?is the work stressen you yet?have you got to meet anyone famous like joel or benji madden?hey hey hey anyone?LOL.anywho i really liked this song,the chorus isnt bad but it does need a little touching up!well rodney my girl i miss you,so does everyone else and apparently cheech and everyone else from that side,by the way who might cheech be?i dont ever recall talking to her,but hey knowing me i probably did LOL,well this is good-bye for now but please come over and see me once in a while that is whe you come home!g2g later lover!

booboo**


Re: Tell Me The Truth (User Rating: 1 )
by booboo on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 04:35:15 AM AEST
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aww thats sad,did he really cheat on you hun?i hope not thats just cruel and stupid how can someone cheat on someone?but hey atleast you got to make a good poem outa it right?

booboo


Re: Tell Me The Truth (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 12:20:46 PM AEST
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not bad but what a poop head




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