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Monster Under My Bed
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 12:31:59 PM in AEST
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I’m scared of the monster under my bed,
Most people think he’s just in my head,
Why will no-one believe me?
Do you only believe in things you can see?
He is real & he comes to me at night,
Filling my entire body with such fright,
I lat stiff in my bed hugging my pillow,
Hoping that one day finally he will go.
Leave from my world, spare me my sanity,
Stop whispering into my ear all his profanity,
I have never seen him but I hear him breathe,
I doubt from his hiding place he’ll ever leave.
Sometimes I am scared to take a peek,
So around my room I very quietly creep,
I don’t dare wake him as he will be mad,
& what he’ll do to me will be very bad.
He strikes into me so much fear,
I know when I sleep he will always be near,
I am terrified of the monster under my bed,
I fear if I ever wake him I’ll end up dead.
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Re: Monster Under My Bed
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by silverscent on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 12:41:29 PM AEST
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Great write, i liked it.
Thanks for the comment on mine.
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Re: Monster Under My Bed
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by skyblumoon on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 12:51:52 PM AEST
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This is great. It reminds me of when I was young.
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Re: Monster Under My Bed
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by bernard on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 12:58:24 PM AEST
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| Most young people have a fear that they dread especially on dark nights. bernard |
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Re: Monster Under My Bed
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 12:59:38 PM AEST
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This is a great poem, it also reminds me of when I was little.
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Re: Monster Under My Bed
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 01:52:55 PM AEST
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Experienced monster seeker here, I got a little one who is certain now that the bed sits on the floor ... the Monster moved into the heat vent on the floor !!!!
Great write !!!
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Re: Monster Under My Bed
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by Dorian on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 02:46:45 PM AEST
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beautiful pixie about a not so beautiful person . . .
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Re: Monster Under My Bed
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by shadows on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 04:32:28 PM AEST
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| Brilliant, most people have a fear of something in there room at some point in their life. |
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Re: Monster Under My Bed
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by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 10:14:19 PM AEST
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this is a great write...i cant help but think of my childhood when i read this....awesome job
Lots of Love
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Re: Monster Under My Bed
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by Silent-No-More on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 10:38:36 PM AEST
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Awwww Pixie... we all have monsters. Call me crazy... but... I didn't find myself shifting back to childhood as I read this - but... considering my biggest fears (the ones that I'm not so certain I'm ready to confront). They do seem bigger at night... and, I think, we're less able to deny they are there when we find ourselves alone with them in the dark.
Thought provoking... and honest.
Nicely done!
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Re: Monster Under My Bed
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by Ronald on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 12:53:55 AM AEST
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| Hey, what a poem you have here! Great write I must say! |
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Re: Monster Under My Bed
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by Hurretje on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 02:28:08 AM AEST
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Wow, good write... let the scariness flow in...
Hugs,
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