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Poison
Contributed by
bonita2689
on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 10:13:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
poets
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A dark world I paint for you
inspired by a golden glitter
My palette
wicked and cynical
a sick portrayal
These writings - litter
A fallicy of reality
Only a temptation of sin
guilty as charged
Yet you still take me in
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Re: Poison
(User Rating: 1 ) by skyblumoon on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 10:29:12 AM AEST (User
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Very neat write. I like it alot. |
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Re: Poison
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sirena_Degana on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 10:30:32 AM AEST (User
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good insight |
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Re: Poison
(User Rating: 1 ) by xxbreathlessx on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 09:44:00 AM AEST (User
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wow. so short and yet So powerful. what an awesome poem! |
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