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T@tt=r=ed J=@ns
Contributed by
Sirena_Degana
on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 10:08:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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torn and worn
pleasantly ripped
comfortably used
open and closed...
minded.
bought and sold
displayed to the public
like an open sore.
I don't understand
how i fit to you anymore.
You've shaped me to your understanding,
to your helpless world.
You've grown away from me.
I'm too small and helpless
to spare your needs.
Copyright ©
Sirena_Degana
... [
2004-10-12 10:08:47]
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Re: T@tt=r=ed J=@ns
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by skyblumoon on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 10:16:12 AM AEST
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| Great mediforic poem. I really liked it. |
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Re: T@tt=r=ed J=@ns
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by in2thetwilightzone2 on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 03:03:15 PM AEST
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| strange. i take it its metaphorical |
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Re: T@tt=r=ed J=@ns
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 08:40:41 PM AEST
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| Great write that left me thinking. Very deep. Thanks for sharing. Much peace. |
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