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Dying
Contributed by
frozensuicide
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Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 05:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The darkness is cold and the winters are freezing.
neglection and deprivation just as cold as decieving.
thoughts to fall into an eternal slumber is exeding.
the air in my chest is breathing.
my eyes are burning with tears.
my body is shaking with fears.
falling to my oblivion with less cares,
ending my saddened life with dares.
the glowing light is fading so slowly it screams.
the smiles on my face of hope and dreams
are gone like
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2002-11-15 05:30:00]
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Re: Dying
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 06:03:38 AM AEST
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| How very sad,and a scary thought! Good work! Christina |
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Re: Dying
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by wyrd_faerie on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 05:59:43 AM AEST
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i have written a poem a lot like that...it even has almost exactly the same lines as
' my eyes are burning with tears
my body is shaking with fears.'
beautifully done |
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Re: Dying
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by 0o_Jelly_Bean_o0 on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 12:31:09 AM AEST
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its a good write, very sad but very good, keep up your writing,
Ms Bean |
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