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Shared Anticipation
Contributed by
Lovingangel4u
on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 06:17:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My pulsing soft lips touch yours gently
Then we move our hands just as intently.
I feel your warm breathe caressing my skin
As I catch my breath, it gets caught within.
I touch your bare chest and we are intertwined
I feel you heart beat so close to mine.
Wet skin shimmering in the candlelight
All time has stood still in this passionate night
Moans of ecstasy fill the air
As words of your love are declared
My body throbbing of love wanting to lose control
My love takes me body and soul.
Lovingangel4u
Copyright ©
Lovingangel4u
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2004-10-12 06:17:27] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Shared Anticipation
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 06:19:17 AM AEST (User
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awwww gorgeous write, very sweet,
pixie xx |
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Re: Shared Anticipation
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 06:22:19 AM AEST (User
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Steamy and sensual, an eye raiser written with pure flowing emotions, and painted a rather vivid picture, lol maybe too vivid.
Cool poem. |
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Re: Shared Anticipation
(User Rating: 1 ) by outsider on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 06:54:46 AM AEST (User
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Yes very special tha gra agam orst gu bragh.
Jinna inhobbok hafna
Albi tieghi mo gradh that was very well written indeed |
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Re: Shared Anticipation
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 07:50:49 AM AEST (User
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Wonderful write. So full of passion.........Mike |
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Re: Shared Anticipation
(User Rating: 1 ) by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 09:06:08 AM AEST (User
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very sensual, loving it everytime i read it.
jane |
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Re: Shared Anticipation
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 05:20:12 AM AEST (User
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A masterpeice, very sweet.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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