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On the road
Contributed by
Archie
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Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 04:14:03 AM in AEST
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I am walking on the road to nowhere,
no goals no dreams do I have
and the choices go by in a glimmer
as I walk down the rocky road.
There are mountains
There are valleys
The swallow's song does blow upon the wind
and the sun shines
through the tree tops
Awesome is the view that I now see.
I am walking down the road to some where;
I have goals, I have dreams, I have cares.
There are sixty-million choices before me
as I walk down the narrow road.
There are cliff tops,
there are drop offs.
The eagles song is fell upon the breeze
and the sun shines
or'e the valley
as the sun sets in the distance far from me.
Darkness sets upon the valley; a road to heaven.
Life's replete with twists and turns on every path
Hopefully I will soon reach that longed fairied haven
with honey dew and water clear as glass
And the mem'ry of my journey will be voided
I will walk the fabled streets forever more
Copyright ©
Archie
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2004-10-12 04:14:03]
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Re: On the road
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by shanarah on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 04:28:45 AM AEST
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this is really nice, very visiual, thanks, take care,
shanarah... |
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Re: On the road
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 04:40:45 AM AEST
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| Beautiful thoughts painted with beautiful images of nature..it is like a beautiful fascinating song. :-) venkat |
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Re: On the road
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by Tanmaya on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 04:49:34 AM AEST
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Beautiful!
I loved the last two stanzas.
I can identify with so much of this.
Loved reading it. |
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Re: On the road
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 06:04:54 AM AEST
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A beautiful write, to me it sounded like a country and western song, or that is the feel I got from it.
Still though, it sounded really cool, my eyes may have read the write, but my mind sung the song, I really liked the way this flows and awesome write. |
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Re: On the road
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by sweetangeluk on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 07:09:31 AM AEST
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Beautiful lyrics Archie. I had this tune in my head that went perfect with the rhythm of the song. it sounded fab to me.
Loved it well done
Love Sweetangelukxxx |
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Re: On the road
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 05:26:52 PM AEST
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Wonderful words, Archie..... loved this a lot...
Jenni |
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Re: On the road
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by savedbydeath on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 06:17:47 PM AEST
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wow!such great lyrics and very beautiful,i really enjoyed this,thanx for sharing,keep up the great job!keep'em coming!
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Re: On the road
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 05:30:37 AM AEST
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Another masterpeice. Keep up the great work.
huggs,
emy |
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