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Why...?
Contributed by
mylastwords
on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 03:28:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I ask why...
Why did you cheat...?
Why wasn't I good enough...?
What did I do wrong...?
Why was I so stupid as to not see it coming...?
I just don't understand...
Why did you continue to say 'I love you'...
When you really didn't mean it...?
Why did I have to fall...
Fall head over heels for a stupid guy like you...?
You used me,
You abused me,
You *** humiliated me...
Yet why do I still love you...?
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2004-10-12 03:28:25]
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Re: Why...?
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by tormentedpixie on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 02:08:39 PM AEST
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| Nice write. Simple and straight to the point, but you expressed the emotion well. Maybe you should try making it longer, just a suggestion. Thanks for commenting on my work. |
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Re: Why...?
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by AdamChantell on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 01:08:09 PM AEST
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| i think it was good just like it is. one of these days you will find the right guy that will treat you the way you want to be treated. sorry this guy you love hurts you. i hate when people say "i love you" and have no concept of what love means... or when they say "i love you" they really don't. anyways i feel and understand this write... great job. |
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