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See the Picture
Contributed by
row
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Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 03:15:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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See the picture
the bigger picture
the cluttered, flooded, ugly picture
The skies of blue
the words are true
the seasons, the seasons, the seasons are few
Make me love
a subtle love
an endless sentence of kind love
Copyright ©
row
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2004-10-12 03:15:17]
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Re: See the Picture
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by shanarah on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 04:37:53 AM AEST
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unique, great style. take care,
shanarah... |
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Re: See the Picture
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by Tanmaya on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 04:57:02 AM AEST
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Quite unique and inspired.
Liked the style of your writing.
Coz it's simple, but speaks so much.
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Re: See the Picture
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 06:09:01 AM AEST
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| Interesting style, yet cool to read, and it flowed with a certain rythem, I liked this poem awesome write. |
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Re: See the Picture
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by Stej on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 11:35:10 PM AEST
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great work ...! you don't have to write line after line to get somethin really effective. short and simple ..nice
cya rowz |
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