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Bridges
Contributed by
Tanmaya
on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 01:53:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Questions, puzzles,
and a million mysteries,
all come together
every time we meet.
And what is said
is not the spoken.
The shadows rise
the lights fall deep.
If smiles could speak
they would tell me
what you really mean
beyond all your words.
If silences could sing
you would really listen…
the music waiting with roses,
deep in the sleeping buds.
Every heart has it’s song,
yours and mine are so different.
The tunes don’t always merge,
the words don’t always rhyme.
But, if songs had spirits,
our songs would be friends.
The kind that have a bond
that remains through all of time.
I could give you a map,
showing how to find me.
But bridges are built on the
rocks of searching and finding.
And the ones that are strongest
are the ones that take time…
So long, I’ll meet you there, over
the blue waters and the wind.
Copyright ©
Tanmaya
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2004-10-12 01:53:46]
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Re: Bridges
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by m3 on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 02:41:04 AM AEST
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| I like this, it reminds me of a friend I haven't spoke to in a while, perhaps I should contact him... |
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Re: Bridges
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 03:11:56 AM AEST
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interesting thoughts, makes me think upon some people... great write!
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Re: Bridges
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 06:46:08 AM AEST
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| Awesome poem, with a primo message, and an excellent storyline, visual pictures painted, and it was easy reading, I liked it so cool. |
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Re: Bridges
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 10:57:26 AM AEST
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Just beautiful.
I agree with the message too,
Wonderful write! |
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Re: Bridges
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 03:54:00 PM AEST
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| This is really good I am very impressed by your imagery. |
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Re: Bridges
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 03:27:16 AM AEST
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Ah, depth! This poem shows a real understanding, said better than I could have done. Excellent work.
Blessings to you!
Andrew |
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Re: Bridges
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 06:37:16 PM AEST
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Awesome! I love the words and phrases you use. Simply beautiful.
Take care.
David |
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