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Your Words and Mine
Contributed by
Bruce
on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 11:55:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I read the words you wrote
they moved me very much
Makes me even more
hunger for your touch
To hold you in my arms
kiss your tender lips
Feel the warmth of your body
the movement of your hips
Loving every inch of you
from your head down to your toes
The two of us in heaven
as we each remove our clothes
How wonderful this is will be
making love to you
Our constant thought and dreams
once again, coming true
Having been here once before
we both know what to expect
we know everything for us
will be more than perfect
What a fantastic feeling this is
to love and feel like this
Thank you my precious darling
for all the heavenly bliss
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2004-10-11 23:55:56]
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Re: Your Words and Mine
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by loulou on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 12:53:27 AM AEST
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| So where do you live! Just joking. It was really good. If your words repersent the way you are in bed I envey your girlfriend. |
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Re: Your Words and Mine
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 01:14:00 AM AEST
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^^lmao, the poem is really good. thanks for sharing this hot hot poem.
Jane |
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Re: Your Words and Mine
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by m3 on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 02:10:14 AM AEST
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| Yeah.... um...I better clear my cache so my gf don't read this poem or I'll have some serious competition...if she ever finds you |
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Re: Your Words and Mine
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 04:16:38 AM AEST
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^^ yup u better clear your cache, we dont your girlfriend reading this sexual poem you just wrote lol.
Jane |
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Re: Your Words and Mine
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by shanarah on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 04:35:26 AM AEST
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you always amaze me. very passionate, nice write. take care,
shanarah... |
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Re: Your Words and Mine
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 05:27:49 AM AEST
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*fans herself* wow Bruce that was scorching lol great write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Your Words and Mine
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by a_bear on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 06:28:54 AM AEST
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well Bruce..my ears must be going bad..expect does not rhyme with perfect..to my poets ears..
checked my rhyming dictionary..here's some words that do.
becht, brecht, checked, decked, fecht, hecht, knecht, necked, pecht, precht, recht, schlecht, sect, specht, trekked, wecht, wrecked
2 syllables:
affect, bedecked, collect, confect, connect, correct, defect, deflect, deject, deregt, detect, direct, dissect, effect, eject, elect, erect, infect, inject, inspect, neglect, object, perfect, project, protect, rechecked, reflect, reject, respect, select, subject, suspect, unchecked
Copyright © 2004 Datamuse
I like the word erect...But now that I'm looking at it..I see that it should rhyme..and I'm wondering why I don't think it does...must be the x in expect..do you expect???
All that time for nothing..ahh well. can't sleep anyway.
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Re: Your Words and Mine
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by sweetangeluk on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 07:19:58 AM AEST
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Sitting at my desk cup of tea still in hand. lol Shaken not stirred...after reading these words.
That was quite steamy Bruce.
Wonderful poem
Love sweetangelukxxxx |
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Re: Your Words and Mine
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by thumper on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 08:53:52 AM AEST
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Nice poem, Bruce. I appreciated this write. You have such beauty in your words. Who ever this lady is, she's very lucky!! I haven't been on for a couple of weeks, so I will be catching up on your writes. OK? Peace to you, Bruce!
Luv
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