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I FEEL
Contributed by
destinyfate
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Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 11:53:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Sometimes I feel so lonely and cold,
as if my life has been put on hold.
I feel so hurt and all alone,
as my feelings , like you, now are gone.
But then again there's nothing but pain,
as I begin to feel like I'm going insane.
Just when I think I've done lost my mind,
everything goes dark as if I'm blind.
Then comes the ringing in my ears,
as I feel wetness on my face from tears.
My heart feels like it's been ripped to shreds,
I don't feel alive, I feel dead.
I feel like I have nothing more to loose.
The feelings are not the ones I would choose.
With nothing to loose and nothing to fear,
I feel my world is over with out you here.
written by: Tonya L. Turner
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destinyfate
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2004-10-11 23:53:10]
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Re: I FEEL
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by Rxqueen on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 06:23:51 AM AEST
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| I really like this one. It is good. Being lonely sucks! I have a man and still there are days when I feel alone... |
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Re: I FEEL
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 09:27:33 AM AEST
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| A very sad poem and emotional, I feel the pain of loss within your words, a beautifully written poem, visaul and with in awesome ryhming style. |
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