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Depressions Wh***
Contributed by
thumper
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Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 11:05:51 PM in AEST
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Often I succomb to depression, and when I do, I just don't associate with anyone or even get on the computer. At these times, I just don't even feel worthy of company. This is my private Hell.
Deep inside the depths of Hell
In pain and misery I dwell
Knowing naught if night or day
I keep myself hidden away
Thoughts inside my head do spin
Repeating over and over again
They won't release me, let me go
I shy away from people I know
I will not drag them down with me
It won't release me, set me free.
This is my torment, it's my pain
Mental agony is where I reign
I can't escape it, I cannot flee
Tortured thoughts make a prisoner of me
I sense it coming, I try to evade
But it just keeps building day by day
One week, two weeks, three weeks, more
It's obvious, I'm depression's wh***
Each time depression calls on me
The visit lasts longer and longer, see?
Imprisioning me in it's ebon grip
With deadly talons of razor tip
The blackness creeps up ever slowly
Manipulates me. Controls me totally.
I'm locked within my mental cell
Waiting for toll of Death's bell
For end of life to comfort me
Death's gentle kiss to set me free
There'll be no torment, no more pain
And no more tears from heart will rain.
Copyright ©
thumper
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Re: Depressions Wh***
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 02:18:01 AM AEST
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| OMG..your emotions have upsurged in this poem like a fountain. excellent poetic work expressed very well.Thanks for the sharing my friend. but don't give in to deppression.:-) venkat |
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Re: Depressions Wh***
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 05:30:19 AM AEST
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I wondered why you'd not been around much and now I know why :( *hugs*
very well expressed, I too often feel like depressions whore,
pixie xx |
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Re: Depressions Wh***
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 06:07:18 AM AEST
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Bingo......
Stated to perfection
Very well done
Larry |
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Re: Depressions Wh***
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by brew on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 07:41:43 AM AEST
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| Take something, that can make you happy....dont sweat, on the lil things, it isnt worth it. Know , there is hope and happiness out there.,and it will get you through. We all want the great thing, happiness.....and will find it , in time. |
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Re: Depressions Wh***
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 09:37:15 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem, overflowing with such powerful emotions, a truly epic poem, one that rings from the heart, and your words are felt by all.
i wish you all the best and hope you find relief from such agonised depresion, you are missed by amny that I can see, and you words show such true talent and beauty.
Take care always |
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Re: Depressions Wh***
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by skyblumoon on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 09:42:31 AM AEST
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Great poem. I feel the same way most day's.
You have a wonderful way of expressing yourself. I hope to read more your poems. |
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Re: Depressions Wh***
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by AliB on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 10:40:19 AM AEST
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Brilliant poem, your choice of words were excellent. Don't give in to your depression, you sound much stronger than that, talk to people, don't hide away, we can't help you out of your depression if you're not here!!!!! Am I right or am I right?? Lol.
Ali xx |
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Re: Depressions Wh***
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by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 10:26:44 PM AEST
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This is a great write...i am sorry for the depression you have tho...i too know what it is like to be depressed...great write
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: Depressions Wh***
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by Hurretje on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 02:16:28 AM AEST
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Sad and haunting write... It's a shame that you don't come to YPDC when you're way down, because there are people who are willing to listen and cheer you up;-).
Hugs and peace,
Hur |
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Re: Depressions Wh***
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 12:01:11 PM AEST
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This is fantastic !!! I am amazed at how well you are able to describe the dark beast that is depression. It visits me at times too. I hope you are able to find escape in pleasant endevors soon. *****
Nazmythian ~ |
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Re: Depressions Wh***
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 01:28:47 AM AEST
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Amazing write! (And I don't use that word often.) This is incredibly well expressed. Any soul that has known depression will recognize it here. This is the darkness from inside out.
And I won't tell you not to succumb, I will not say to cheer up or chin up (to do so just seems silly)... nor will I tell you to reach out to others when it seems the last possible thing that you would want to do. I will say only this... depression is, to me, like a summer thunderstorm... after the rain comes, the sun always, always returns.
Hugs, thump... I am in absolute awe of this-
SNM |
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Re: Depressions Wh***
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by bernard on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 11:54:15 AM AEST
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| Thumper this is not like your usual self. The poem suggests you are going through a bad phase. Depression is something I dread. I get it every two months or so. My doc gives me some little pills that gradually take it away. The poem is great 5/5 and hugs from bernard. |
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Re: Depressions Wh***
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by xXcrossedXx on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 12:49:18 PM AEST
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Oh Thumper!
This was beautifully written, I love your poetry, every time I read it my heart cries... its beautifully tragic every time. I too feel the need to get away from people when I get depressed enough.. I do it because I get so insecure though, this was a wonderful write Thumper... keep up the writes I love reading them.
PM if you want,
.amanda. |
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Re: Depressions Wh***
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 07:33:06 AM AEST
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This was very powerful... very sad. Depression is a killer, it's gotten me more times than I can say. May you find an escape, fellow poet, from its grasp.
Take care.
David (Who just recently escaped) |
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Re: Depressions Wh***
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by emystar on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 07:08:40 AM AEST
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I caN SO RELATE BUT i TAKE MEDS THAT HELP ME.
HUGGS,
emy
Course they don't do any good for my putor, smiles |
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