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Her beautiful, smiling face
Contributed by
fetch
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Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 10:47:20 PM in AEST
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Her beautiful, smiling face is assumed to equal happiness,
and with people all around her how could she feel lonly.
But the inside is tangled up,
confused of not knowing what way to go.
Feeling alone without another soul to relate.
Not letting out these feelings,
they build up one by one,
without anyones awareness,
because of her beautiful, smiling face.
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Re: Her beautiful, smiling face
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by Greg_Skellington on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 01:54:28 PM AEST
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| all i can saw is wow |
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Re: Her beautiful, smiling face
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by Kenesha4 on
Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 12:26:36 AM AEST
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i enjoyed your poem it's classic writing with a twist i dont know how to explain it but it really good keep it up!!!
kenesha |
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