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Dark Heart
Contributed by
tractorbabe
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Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 09:04:55 PM in AEST
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Deep inside
Anger flooding my heart
No longer can I see
My souls torn apart
All along the
Jagged edge
My heart it bleeds
So close to dead
The dripping blood
Slowly feeds
On every living
Memories
Torn apart
Ripped in to
There’s only so much
Some one can do
Please don’t ask
Or try to see
The pain that comes
From with in me
Copyright ©
tractorbabe
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2004-10-11 21:04:55]
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Re: Dark Heart
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 09:13:30 PM AEST
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| very good write, but check your grammar. |
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Re: Dark Heart
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by mylastwords on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 10:20:42 PM AEST
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great write once again...i love your work...i feel it...keep it up...
luv always xxooxx mylastwords xxooxx |
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