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Leslie
Contributed by
loulou
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Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 09:00:03 PM in AEST
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She looks so peaceful and calm as she lies there and rests,
As I look around and see every ones' hearts breakingin their chests.
My gorgeous angels' breath is getting terribly slow,
She seems so helpless, but this she'd never show.
I'm getting more scared as the minutes pass by,
I can't believe the strongest women I know is going to die.
I hear people's tears falling to the floor as they look upon her face,
My head is pounding with the dimming sound of her hearts pace.
My mind keeps racing with that big question.... Why,
Why does she have to die; why does she have to leave us behind,
And as I franticly search I finally find the reason deep in my mind.
It wasn't fair to her to feel so much hurt and pain,
And yet I continue to cry as I play with her hands vain.
While sitting by her side I see the wrinkles disappear,
Even though we're not ready we realize the end is near.
Grandpa and I know as she takes her last breath,
That our beloved one has been overcome by death.
But this is not the end; I will carry on her name,
And this I promise to her: I will not put it to shame.
I will make my grandmother proud of me.
Copyright ©
loulou
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2004-10-11 21:00:03]
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Re: Leslie
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 09:20:27 PM AEST
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| i hope you do well in that. |
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Re: Leslie
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by emystar on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 09:31:11 PM AEST
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I'm sos oory for your loss. Now she is your guardian angel looking over your shoulder and I'm sure she's very proud of u.
A fine masterpeice in dedication to your grand mother.
luv, huggs, strength,
emy |
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Re: Leslie
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 08:27:59 AM AEST
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| So very touching!I lost my mom 3 years ago in Oct. I know the pain well . Good write for her. Christina |
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Re: Leslie
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by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on
Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 01:09:33 PM AEST
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| VERY TOUCHING I JUST LOST MY GRANNY TO |
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