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Me
Contributed by
lessa
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Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 08:54:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I wish they made a movie about me
it would star Cameron diaz
Or maybe a no name blonde
It would have music my Eminem
and a storyline to die for
cause see a story about me
it would be quite sad i guess
or maybe very uplifting
help those who cut or cry
im a smalltown girl with a mom and a dad
they divorced, i was sad
my daddy cheated with a friend
oh well he hit me when he drank anyway
but then he quite
oh the story has a small twist
he left my mom got sad, drank, did drugs
alot of people did that
she told me i was fat at 115 pounds
she told me i was a bum
"get a job, your such a whore"
she sent me away
after she found out i got high with my dad
then she found out i cut alot,
my arms, my legs, my fat stomach,
then she found out i had sex alot
to get away from my problems like her at home
oh good! all good movies need sex right?
i raised my sister, while i was gone my mother took over
my sister is a user now since i got sent away
i came home from the hospital and thought all was great,
Dad drank no more booze, so i was so happy
1 year later 17 years old almost get to leave mother's home
it looks like the end to the story, but not yet!!
i moved in with a guy just to get out of there
she was still a jerk
tellin me i was so wrong
so messed up in the head
"oh i had hated her" she'd say "oh i did so much for you"
what a lie!
I lived with a boy at barley 17, i finally was free
then that ended as fast as can be
a year, i was 18, got my lisance
its the party time for this story line
the story grows thick as we see something here
the star shows us something
the bad girl side of women
you see in this no one wants a bad girl
they like to play, they like to dabble
but never keep a bad girl
liveing in her car, but still staying in school
haveing sex for food and shower
doing bad things just to live life
down in the dumps in a gutter
See here is the climax, it ends in moments
She finds her tru love, he takes her in, cleans her up
tames the wild girl
marrige is soon, a home, a little dog
Daddy finds a girlfriend,
she loves her so unlike her mom ever could
the star is truly happy, has a mom, a dad, a love
money is tight, but hey thats life
this is the end, dont u think i need a movie?
Copyright ©
lessa
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2004-10-11 20:54:16]
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Re: Me
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 09:23:25 PM AEST
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| you have a very unique style. |
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Re: Me
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by emystar on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 09:36:49 PM AEST
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Sad but ends well and great writing. Yeah, sounds like a movie.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Me
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by xxbreathlessx on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 09:48:59 AM AEST
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| wow. thats alot to deal with it. it dose sound like a movie but in the end i think it would be uplifting to people. you could be thier idol. on the poem i think it was great you said exactly what you felt, and it was raw. awesome job. |
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