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Keep On Calling
Contributed by
frozensuicide
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Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 04:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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A reconcilliation of an ending.
something no matter what
you cant hide, the falling
the collection of the profound thoughts. but,
you keep on calling.
whn you never knew why,
you felt the urge to fly, you
would just sit dowm, trapped, and cry.
you would never know why you,
would ever wish to defy.
the constellations of a thought.
the comteplating encircling your eyes.
i see right through the gough.
i feel the end is over, cries
are heard to be found and sought.
A sence of reality,
a fatal death, you dont know what your thinking.
a shortened length of your fantasy
you heart is sinking
you are a casualty.
but you keep on calling
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2002-11-15 04:30:00]
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Re: Keep On Calling
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 05:37:43 AM AEST
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This is absolutely beautiful
I really enjoyed reading this, it's
different and creative, Thanks
for sharing this one and Welcome
to YPDC. Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Keep On Calling
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 05:47:10 AM AEST
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| this was a sad & touching peice,I liked it! Christina |
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