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TiMe
Contributed by
Rxqueen
on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 06:47:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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as time closes in
I begin
to realize
time flows
it goes
and never stops
I try to...
and so do you
but we can't
hold it
save it
slow it down
so we are forced to
give into
the time
that flies
by
Copyright ©
Rxqueen
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2004-10-11 18:47:35]
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Re: TiMe
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by Jenn2004 on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 06:57:40 PM AEST
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| good write!! Thank you for commenting on mine!!! |
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Re: TiMe
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by Remy on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 08:39:14 PM AEST
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interesting, feels like it's droning on ever so slowly... i like this.
-smelly_man! |
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Re: TiMe
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by thumper on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 08:43:03 AM AEST
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I liked this. I did one about time but not like this! I enjoyed reading. And it was short and sweet. AND true. Peace
Thumps ; 0) |
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Re: TiMe
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by loveisendless on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 02:30:04 AM AEST
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IT SLIDES ON BY SO NICE! GREAT WAY TO WRITE I MIGHT ADD!! IN OTHER WORDS I LIKED IT ALOT!!!
Lots Of Love~DAN!!!! |
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Re: TiMe
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by cryingonmyporch on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 06:10:51 PM AEST
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so very true
~amy |
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Re: TiMe
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by Vice1 on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 12:37:18 AM AEST
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| the flow of time takes in all, very true. |
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Re: TiMe
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by UnlovedChild on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 03:25:22 AM AEST
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| When I read it I was surprised because it is so different from your other poems , but you transition really well . |
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