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Last Words
Contributed by
Jenn2004
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Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 06:21:58 PM in AEST
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SadPoetry
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Looking thru the pages of my Yearbook wondering what i would find,
I came across your last words that you left behind,
Wish we could go back to yesterday,
back to the days before God took you away,
What happened to those days when life was so good?
If i could turn back the time i would,
If i knew it was your time to go, i would of told you what i had to say,
But instead, i look at your last words today,
I still look at your last words written down on the page,
Its still there as you left it, even when we change and when we age,
These memories will always stay fresh in my mind,
I'll never forget those last words that you left behind.
Copyright ©
Jenn2004
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2004-10-11 18:21:58]
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Re: Last Words
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by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 06:25:49 PM AEST
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| So sad. Losing someone you've known since you were young is hard. |
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Re: Last Words
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by shadowmoon on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 06:38:50 PM AEST
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this is so sad. times like thas are hard. just the other day i found a pic of a dead friend. it is hard to deal with. you captered how you felt. best wishes.
love
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Re: Last Words
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by Remy on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 07:43:25 PM AEST
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hum, nice to muse upon the things passed away... albeit it's sadness weighs heavy, it is a good memory. cheers!
-smelly_man! |
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Re: Last Words
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by Trisha on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 11:55:50 PM AEST
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Wow I am sorry about your friend.
What happen to him? |
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Re: Last Words
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by emystar on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 04:08:18 AM AEST
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Sad but a great write.
It helps one realize jus how short life is for some.
Sorry for your loss.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Last Words
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by UnfallenTears on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 07:31:59 PM AEST
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| Thank you... This one really sinks in for me. It's still really hard... because I just saw him last week. |
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