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Your Eyes
Contributed by
ALineAboveTheStepBeneath
on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 06:11:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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All doubts fade
With the warmth from your eyes
A heat that does not fade
Like the warmth of summer does
When the leaves turn
To violent shades of orange and red
Contrasting beautifully
Against the bright blue backdrop
Of an autumn sky
Nor does it fade
With the promise of snow
And frigid temperatures
Despite the cold
Your eyes keep me warm
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ALineAboveTheStepBeneath
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2004-10-11 18:11:00]
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Re: Your Eyes
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by SkaterGirl16 on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 06:15:19 PM AEST
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| I LOVE the descriptiveness of this poem! Lotta color! Good job! |
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Re: Your Eyes
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by Remy on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 07:37:41 PM AEST
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i like the imagery you paint, good use of language...
-smelly_man! |
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