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Womans Steel
Contributed by
01_zanzebar
on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 05:30:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Oh she's eternally here
swamped in bills and beers
needle and thread, treacles and breads
tiny tinted ebony snu
dusty in-gotten clouds
blood
blotten
blitten
bitten
bought from gain
lost through lessons on devotion
an eternal occurance, she waits for the night
a vast world to the pastures
of rubble, corn, wheat and fixtures
a head drives me
if i dont go crazy, i'll surely go insane
divers in some southen sea
exporing deep depths
tangled corridors, pipes and doors
seeps septh the depth carried and whored
left out, mitosys'ian mights and mitres
the gurle of life, reject, deject and defunkt
rabble, babble, infetted toule and toil
nocturne eclpses, she closes after the night
like a shop, but here, left to rot
be out in it on a pout, with lips, she suggests further
to tangle and to toil some more
just before the deal is done
from a bed shes eternally near
a curse be left awake at night
a war, never conquered but here
Copyright ©
01_zanzebar
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2004-10-11 17:30:45]
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Re: Womans Steel
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by shelby on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 05:33:47 PM AEST
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caught me up in this one well done
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Re: Womans Steel
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 05:35:51 PM AEST
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| good write. i loved the last stanza in this one. |
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Re: Womans Steel
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by thumper on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 08:05:32 AM AEST
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WOW!! Cool!! "If I don't go crazy, I'll surely go insame" Yep, that's me! lol Really loved this. Different, but I like different. Write on.
Thumps ; 0) |
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Re: Womans Steel
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by xxbreathlessx on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 09:53:15 AM AEST
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| great write! especialy the beggining! |
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