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In the Grave
Contributed by
MysticFireFairy
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Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 03:27:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Below the ground,
This is where I fell,
Broken souls,
Buried deep beneath,
This haunted ground,
Land where I live now,
Feeding on blood,
In my mind I rise again
The smell of you lingering,
My river of blood flows,
It was all for you,
My sacrifice for you
Unholy pain,
Stuck below,
No peach at all,
In my mind I rise
My grave below your feet,
You shall suffer defeat,
You forgot my evil below,
I win and your blood flows.
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Re: In the Grave
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by pixie on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 03:28:37 PM AEST
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a [powerful, dark write,
pixie xx |
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Re: In the Grave
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by Vicxy on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 07:46:31 PM AEST
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| Good job on conveying your feelings and word usage... You might consider sorting out your thoughts a little more to help the flow but hey, nothings perfect! |
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