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Pondered Thoughts
Contributed by
hoist1atca
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Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 01:31:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Let not angry words guide your life’s way-
For a mouth that spouts out tempered words-
Will cloud a mind so that the truth it doesn’t see-
And all that is left are the lies that were told…
Let not the past guide you into the future-
For yesterday has gone by and can never be tomorrow-
And tomorrow will never come to be today-
So look for guidance in every new today that comes…
Let not the darkness come to rule the light-
And likewise the day reside over the night-
For as both are different in so many ways-
Without one there is no need for the other…
Let not love stray far from your heart-
For the soul searches emotion as it’s nourishment-
And to starve the spirit that dwells within-
Surely will bring about life’s very end…
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2004-10-11 13:31:56]
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Re: Pondered Thoughts
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 10:46:20 PM AEST
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That last verse really touched me. My soul is starving and my heart is of ice. My world is crumbling around me and there is nothing I can do but watch. My life used to have everything. In an instant it was nothing.
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Re: Pondered Thoughts
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 11:02:58 PM AEST
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OMG, what an exceptional write! I hope more people read
your poetry. This was amazing. It moved me.
~Breezy |
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