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As Colors Fade Away
Contributed by
dalamar
on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 12:53:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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As Colors Fade Away
The rain pours down on my face
As I walk this cold dark place
The wind makes my face so very icy cold
As I hear a voice from my memories so old
Then the rain turns into tears
As the voice reminds me of all my past years
So I run with my blind eyes
Cause I cannot see through all of the lies
And I can’t escape
I can’t break my chains
These memories
they bring me such pain
and so many tears
I’m not ready to go and face all my fears
So like a flame that burns down a house
My unfaced past
It burns me to the ground
I can’t forget what is deep inside
As time destroy my hope and burns me alive
Then my colors fade
And my depression takes its place
I can’t go through this world
with a smile on my face
Copyright ©
dalamar
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2004-10-11 12:53:59]
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Re: As Colors Fade Away
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by sammydid on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 02:04:42 PM AEST
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that was beautiful! i hope you find happiness equal to your talent
-natalie |
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Re: As Colors Fade Away
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by mysticpoet on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:19:18 AM AEST
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I read your poems several times and I agree with sammydid, you are a very good writer. Very good. Hope you find happiness Soon
You deserve it |
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Re: As Colors Fade Away
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by dalamar on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 08:40:47 AM AEST
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| thank you but I don't think I ever will. |
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Re: As Colors Fade Away
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by Rous on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 02:55:44 PM AEST
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| I know exactly how you feel. This poem speaks to me as if my own. Thank you for sharing. And I hope you find peace. |
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Re: As Colors Fade Away
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by remote on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 01:26:15 PM AEST
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| Nice write. |
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