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Barely hanging on (I cant think of a good title..)
Contributed by
caughtinadream
on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 11:08:46 AM in AEST
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As thoughts of indecision come stirring in my mind
Confusion and bitterness are what I seem to find.
Spinning in circles to find my one true friend
Doing nothing but screaming for my shattered heart to mend.
I asked for your guidance, to help me find my way
But all you seemed to do is want this rage to stay.
I shiver, for I'm only hanging on by a thread
Thoughts of darkness and destruction are running through my head.
A little encouragement is all I asked you to do,
I'm hopeless and damaged when I returned from you.
But I can't give up, I won't lose the fight,
Because I know someday everything will be alright.
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2004-10-11 11:08:46]
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Re: Barely hanging on (I cant think of a good title..)
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by MissTea on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 12:14:15 PM AEST
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i love it!! i really do...if u ever need anyone just to listen i'm just a message away!!! and don't worry soon everything WILL be alright!! Brilliant write
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Re: Barely hanging on (I cant think of a good title..)
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by blackeyedgirl on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 12:26:59 PM AEST
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This was great. I loved it. It's so you would think sad but it didn't seem all that sad to me. I think there's more anger in it then there is sadness. Which I totally get. Great job.
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Re: Barely hanging on (I cant think of a good title..)
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 04:00:23 AM AEST
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| awesome, especially the inspirational ending!!! |
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