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Letting Go Of Me
Contributed by
ALineAboveTheStepBeneath
on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 10:42:35 AM in AEST
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Sorry Mom
I know I forgot
Don't worry Dad
I don't smoke pot
I'm growing up now
Can't you see
It's time for you
To let go of me
So let me go
And try to smile
I'll only be gone
A little while
It's okay, Mom
I promise I'll call you
Don't worry Dad
I'll be home by curfew
And when I'm back
I'm sure you'll see
It's not that hard
Letting go of me
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ALineAboveTheStepBeneath
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Re: Letting Go Of Me
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 10:59:48 AM AEST
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well i hope they can let go of you.lol.
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Re: Letting Go Of Me
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by a_bear on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 11:14:07 AM AEST
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| I still can't let go..I try and try. great poem. I'll try harder. |
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Re: Letting Go Of Me
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 12:11:00 PM AEST
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| Excellent poem, very mature. |
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Re: Letting Go Of Me
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by SkaterGirl16 on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 04:22:04 PM AEST
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| Nicely written! Kinda reminds me of a saying I heard a while back... "you give your children roots, but you also give them wings" ^_^ |
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Re: Letting Go Of Me
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by dragon on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 09:06:13 PM AEST
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I hope they let go nice an easy. It is always hard for parents to let their children grow up. I'm sure the poem will help them let go, it is writen really nicely. Good Luck
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