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Feeling low
Contributed by
Mihiri
on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 10:29:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The seasons come,
The seasons go
My mood swings high,
And it swings low
The lowest point,
I’ve yet to find
I push the limit,
With my mind
My mind is hollow,
‘tis blank and bare
‘tis but a gap,
B’tween neck and hair
The seasons come,
The seasons go
My mood swings high,
But, hits the floor
The lowest point,
I have now found
‘tis presently,
Where I am bound
Copyright ©
Mihiri
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2004-10-11 10:29:37]
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Re: Feeling low
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by LouisaMontagu on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 10:34:40 AM AEST
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excellent job!! well done
Louisa xx |
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Re: Feeling low
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by pixie on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 10:39:05 AM AEST
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your flow was amazing, great write,
pxie xx |
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Re: Feeling low
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by a_bear on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 11:11:58 AM AEST
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My mind is hollow,
‘tis blank and bare
‘tis but a gap,
B’tween neck and hair
I could hardly wait to comment on this line..this is sosoo
good. I loved it; but sorry you feel bad :-*( |
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