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See U In The Light
Contributed by
LouisaMontagu
on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 10:08:55 AM in AEST
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Hey, can you here me? is anyone there?
Im in need of a friend right now or someone that cares
Ive been sitting here thinking going out of my head
my brains doing over-time im neglecting my bed
A hard job being regretful, brain aching 24/7
my final resting place i cant find as the doors are shut to heaven
I snapped myself out of it as i thought of you today
u sneaked back in my thoughts again, after i had sworn no way!
the strangest dreams, i jumped up in a wet chill
i thought we were reunited again, honestly it was real
i saw your lips where moving you where talking to me
we held a conversation, i saw you perfectly
I call for someone right now, not even to sit n talk
just someone to be shadowing me, me n my lonely walks
i hate the fact im here again im going in reverse
1 step forward 7months back, is this your promised curse
i no i'l see you again later, when i finally make up to bed
i probably even hear your voice echo in my head
So if your here right now, If You see these words i write
we will entwine when doors are open, i'll see you in the Light
Copyright ©
LouisaMontagu
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2004-10-11 10:08:55]
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Re: See U In The Light
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by Mihiri on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 10:39:26 AM AEST
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This is very nicely written. Someone near and dear to u has left us, if I understand correctly? Well, I'm sorry for your loss... But the gates of heaven will open... someday.
Luv, Mihiri |
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Re: See U In The Light
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 05:50:07 AM AEST
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| A very powerful poem, of rememberence, a vivid picture painted, with feelings galore, a beautiful write, by a wonderful poet, thanks for inviting me to read this poem I really liked. |
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Re: See U In The Light
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by Winter_Mist2004 on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 02:21:38 PM AEST
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I really liked this poem too. The only problem I saw was "Hey, can you here me?" Here is suppose to be "hear," I'm sorry I just had to point that out. Other then that. I love it!
-much love,
Wintermist2004 |
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