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In The Heat.
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 08:26:25 AM in AEST
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As the day draw to aclose
we made love from dust tell dawn.
i couldn't believe she was so strong.
round after round we would go,looking at each other with love glow
hands tightly clap in a love hold ,sweating like hot water in a deep bowl
as time past we couldn't tell,cause befor long we were under sleep spell.
a night to remember,i know i will. that sweet girl sure ring my bell.
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RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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2004-10-11 08:26:25]
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Re: In The Heat.
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by MissTea on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 09:48:38 AM AEST
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really sweet and intimate poem! Sex is truly a beautiful gift that has been given unto us but it can only be enjoyed fully with the right person at the right time. Good write
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Re: In The Heat.
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 05:17:52 PM AEST
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beautiful and passionate, written with class:) hugs n' love nessa
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