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All pain all the way.
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 04:17:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I need to fall down this pain’s so unreal.
It’s an addiction to pick it just so it can’t heal.
I need to do it though, just so I can be real!
But it’s a pretty nasty cut and no release I can feel…!
I need to get out of here and slit in the loos.
Maybe then I’d feel better and maybe not so blue.
The cover sucks! I need to be let loose.
I can’t block out the memory of being abused!!!!!!!
I keep getting nightmares and reliving those days.
I can’t tell any one ‘coz the thought makes me afraid.
He had his way, when I was 9 years of age!
Now for two years he hasn’t played those games.
But I can’t block it out! ‘Coz there’s a solid black stain!
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Re: All pain all the way.
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 05:08:43 AM AEST
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This took alot of guts and strength to write about memories of this type, The sheer agony and sahe through what was done to you, it is no wonder you wish to carve yourself up, to me it is like you are trying to cut the ugliness you feel out.
I havent been abused so I cant feel what you do, yet on the scale of agony in your words, I can see through the visions obtained within your words, what was done to you was horrendous, no one has a right to take innocence and destroy it, or take a soul and drown it in darkness of eternal memories, I hope you find a way past this so that you can get on with life, for unfortuantely I dont know what I can say that will make you feel any better.
I see urgency and anger, pictures of torment and disgust, written with flow written from pain.
To write about your past is an acheivement and possibly the first step, and that is something many never make it to you, I hope you find a way past this barrier or memorie wall of hate.
Take care always
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Re: All pain all the way.
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by pixie on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 05:52:09 AM AEST
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this is a very pained write, and yes it did take alot of courage to write, you are very brave in your poems, as you write about things which relaly hurt you, alot of peo[ple would just bury them deep wothin themselves, I am sorry for your pain, but you must face it before you can start to deal with it,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: All pain all the way.
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by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 01:40:57 PM AEST
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| Your poems are absolutely amazing. They make the reader feel so much. |
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