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Miles of Nothing That Surround Me
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 01:18:09 AM in AEST
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Sometimes I feel like I am alone
And the only views I have are the
Miles of Nothing That Surround Me
As if I where in the center of a salt flat
With nothing in every horizon
But a flat reflection of how this world is
Empty and cold
But my world is not like that
My life is surrounded by a thousand faces
That I am grateful for but I tired of
I want to travel the world and see
Things that I do not know
I so tire of the familiar
And need to explore
There is so much of this world I have not seen
But till I can I remain
Feeling alone in the world
With the only views I have are the
Miles of Nothing That Surround Me
With nothing in every horizon
But a flat reflection of how this world is
Empty and cold
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Re: Miles of Nothing That Surround Me
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by Ronald on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 01:21:10 AM AEST
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| This is nothing short of a great poem! It may be a simple poem but I think it has a very profound meaning within your poem. Great write! |
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Re: Miles of Nothing That Surround Me
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by emystar on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 01:36:55 AM AEST
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Good writing , my friend and unfortunaly sometimes the world is cold and there are many miles of nuthing.
Very creatively written.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Miles of Nothing That Surround Me
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by Row on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 03:52:05 AM AEST
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| yeah nice work |
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Re: Miles of Nothing That Surround Me
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 05:51:56 AM AEST
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A cool poem, one of wishes, that only you can forfill, one day I too would like to go and see some more of the world, and maybe oneday I will.
So I hope you do get to see the wonders, the sights, and get to swim in the freedom of wishes granted. |
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