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Away IN Your World
Contributed by
radicalme
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Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 11:30:00 PM in AEST
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Where do you go,
when you start to show,
the pain inside,
you just dissappear,
showing no fear,
showing no pain,
feeling insane,
wanting to take,
take it all away,
begging me please,
just to take it all away,
I cannot reach,
reach inside your mind,
i climb,
i climb,
never getting to the top,
i stop,
as i look down,
i never see ground,
i never see ground,
i start to wonder,
is there any way in,
or how can i reach,
how can i grip,
starting to slip,
im starting to slip,
cannot climb,
cannot find,
the key to get in,
im loosing my freind,
imloosing my freind,
if there was only a way,
i would often say,
away for you to change,
stray away from the pain,
and let me in,
just lend me the key,
please,
just please let me see
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radicalme
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2002-11-14 23:30:00]
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Re: Away IN Your World
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by OreO on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 12:37:50 AM AEST
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It's hard when you feel there
isn't anyone that listens or that
you can turn to, This brought
tears to my eyes, i really
enjoyed this one Thanks
for sharing it
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Away IN Your World
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by radicalme on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 01:03:30 AM AEST
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| I am waiting for a contract to publish my poems in the mail.I have alot more.look for me and thanks.radicalme@alltel.net |
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Re: Away IN Your World
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by radicalme on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 01:03:31 AM AEST
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| I am waiting for a contract to publish my poems in the mail.I have alot more.look for me and thanks.radicalme@alltel.net |
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Re: Away IN Your World
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by Suzy on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 04:19:21 AM AEST
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I like this and can relate to it as of late...thanks for sharing
Lasca |
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Re: Away IN Your World
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 04:47:17 AM AEST
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| A very emotional write...Well done! |
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