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The Spiders Web
Contributed by
hoist1atca
on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 11:54:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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I watched a spider slowly crawl-
up and down my bedroom wall...
And to me there seemed to be no end-
to the web he tried to mend...
All at once appeared this little fly-
to which the spider began to lie...
“If some time you have to spare-
your help I could use on this repair”...
So the fly having not a clue-
as to what the spider was about to do...
Said that he would really like to stay-
and maybe afterwards they could play...
The fly knew that something was not right-
when upon the spiders web he did light...
And as he struggled to set himself free-
caught in the trap another fly he did see...
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hoist1atca
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2004-10-10 23:54:31]
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Re: The Spiders Web
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by Ronald on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 01:26:30 AM AEST
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| This is so cute! Good job! |
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Re: The Spiders Web
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by emystar on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 01:45:27 AM AEST
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Very good write especially for a 13 year old.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: The Spiders Web
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by Jet on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 03:20:17 PM AEST
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| Nice poem, Good Job. |
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