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Empty
Contributed by
CrimsonTears
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Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 11:26:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I feel so empty deep inside
Nothing to fill my blackened void
I’m falling apart from the inside out
My body and mind are being destroyed
The thoughts in my mind are all so dark
I cannot bare the pain they cause
Ever so slowly they begin to kill me
I’m falling deep into death’s jaws
Tear me to shreds so all can be done
This life is not worth all of the pain
To this world I serve no purpose
From this life there is nothing to gain
Just take my life I don’t want it
Death is not something that I fear
Rather, look forward to a new beginning
There is no reason to shed a tear
I let my emptiness consume me
I have nothing left to give
All I want is to just let go
I have no desire live
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CrimsonTears
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2004-10-10 23:26:51]
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Re: Empty
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by shanarah on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 11:30:16 PM AEST
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Emptiness is never an easy thing to accept.
please hang in there. the write was dark but very good.
take care,
shanarah... |
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Re: Empty
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 11:30:43 PM AEST
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This is a great write. You do have a purpose to life you just got to find it. You should try and find God He is the answer to your problem.
Spazzo |
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Re: Empty
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by jaeann on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 11:41:33 PM AEST
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| i have nothing left to give......yes...i know of this.....heartfelt write..... |
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Re: Empty
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by Jenn2004 on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 11:43:39 PM AEST
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| I know how u feel oh so well!!! Good Peom!!! |
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Re: Empty
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by Ronald on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 12:23:04 AM AEST
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| I'm glad you confided your feelings with YPDC members. It's a good write. Just would like to give you some advice about your emptiness. Try reading some motivational books like Chicken Soup For The Soul or even some Christian motivational books will help you find the true purpose of your life. I wish you all the best pal. Your presence in this Earth here is precious. You have a purpose. Cya pal! |
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Re: Empty
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by Sophie_Taylor on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 03:22:42 AM AEST
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Hey
this was a great poem and you should keep up the good work. i have written a few poems like this so if you get time have a look and let me know if they good or crap cause they are going to be published in a local Kangaroo Island Poetry book which is going to sent overseas. |
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Re: Empty
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 04:26:36 AM AEST
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we haven't spoken in a while...
i've felt like this many times before so i'll under stand if you wanna start talking again, if not then HANG ON IN THERE!!!
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Re: Empty
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by pixie on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 06:47:02 AM AEST
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you have a lot of things left to give your wonderful poetry for a start, this was very sad, emotional, and very well written,
pixie xx |
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Re: Empty
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by sweetangeluk on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 09:51:12 AM AEST
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There is a point in life when all seems lost and empty. Like a dark cloud is consuming your very soul.
It is hard to fight these feelings. Yet fight we must to see the sun shine brightly once again. It helps to do things that make you happy (and no excuses). Its amazing just how doing something pleasant lifts your spirits. A good dvd comedy can make you laugh till your sides hurt. Take positive steps in climbing the ladder back to the light.
A fantastic poem full of heart felt emotions.
Sending you positive thoughts and HUGS
Take care
love Sweetangelukxxx |
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Re: Empty
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by sweetangeluk on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 09:53:01 AM AEST
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There is a point in life when all seems lost and empty. Like a dark cloud is consuming your very soul.
It is hard to fight these feelings. Yet fight we must to see the sun shine brightly once again. It helps to do things that make you happy (and no excuses). Its amazing just how doing something pleasant lifts your spirits. A good dvd comedy can make you laugh till your sides hurt. Take positive steps in climbing the ladder back to the light.
A fantastic poem full of heart felt emotions.
Sending you positive thoughts and HUGS
Take care
love Sweetangelukxxx |
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Re: Empty
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by kidpoet_213 on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 12:45:25 PM AEST
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Hey... I understand totally where ur coming from w/ this... I too have this same feeling at times...
U have expressed it very well here... a very good write... hang in there... the best is yet to come...!
Take care...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Empty
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by Dorkfish on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 03:27:27 PM AEST
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| Very sad, but very good! I'm sorry you feel that way. Been there! |
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