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Jaded Siren
Contributed by
jaeann
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Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 11:14:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Rush me on through it
then I just sit and spin
I can no longer muddle through it
no avenues left to my chagrin.
Everyone's in such a hurry
no one savors the game
they all talk their talk
while I'm left high and lame.
It's always the same old story
when I step out from behind my wall
in the the end there's only me left to worry
about the gift no one wants.....so I heed her call.
Rush me on through it
leave me to sit and spin
cannot find a way around it
no streetcar for her sin.
She's calling me from within the forest
chasing shadows away from the sun
she's banking on who's gonna win first
I know if it's to be her...... I'm clearly done.
She's an evil jaded siren with a haughty grin
who only threatens after they've all gone away
she fuels the fire for the dangerous soul within
taunting me....this time she's come to stay.
Rush me on through it
push and prod and spin
alone I cannot do it
but she'll help me fathom the sin.
She's patient and so very cunning
waiting 'til they break down the walls and leave
once she possesses me I'll be quite stunning
ceasing to need the quest to retrieve.
Her voice is heady and calming
as she makes the little girl sleep inside
the futility's not so alarming
when she says inside her.....I can hide.
Rush me swiftly through it
wrong angle, difficult spin
I no longer have to do it
she said she'd pay for all their sins.
Rush on through my life
tease me with the taste of freedom
recognition seared like a knife
little girl cracked her head on the carousel kingdom.
Rush me on through it
then I just sit and spin
I can no longer muddle through it
no avenues left to my chagrin.
Rush me on through it
leave me to sit and spin
cannot find a way around it
little girl lost......siren wins.
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jaeann
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Re: Jaded Siren
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 11:20:21 PM AEST
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This is beautiful and sad. Great poem though.
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Re: Jaded Siren
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by CrimsonTears on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 11:30:08 PM AEST
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i liked this alot....great write...
Lots of Love
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Re: Jaded Siren
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 12:37:32 AM AEST
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that was a great poem and I love the story
behind it... even though the reader may not
fully get it, but I guess that's the beauty of
poetry...
"tease me with the taste of freedom"
I loved the whole poem, but that line really
stuck out to me.
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Re: Jaded Siren
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by Ronald on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 12:51:57 AM AEST
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| A very profound poem. Great job over here! |
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Re: Jaded Siren
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 04:08:35 AM AEST
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| wow, i love it, this is great, youve done it so well, great write!!!! |
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Re: Jaded Siren
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 06:20:58 AM AEST
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BRAVO!BRAVO!bRAVO! Jaymee this was fantastic............and I could even understand it, and you know that's really something for me!!!!
Well organized, and even I could relate! But don't dare give in to this Siren.........she's jaded as you said, It was all very sad too Jaymee, as most of your write seem to be. I hope you are all right, because I love thee!!!!
Warm hugs and love
consue
P.S. Thank you for letting me know~! |
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