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Bracelets In A Box
Contributed by
cuddlytiger17
on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 10:59:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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As each night slowly fades away
And turns into another weary day
I still find myself thinking of you
And everything we’ve been through
I remember the ecstasy of your laugh
The gentleness in your eyes
And the truth in your lies
I recall just how peaceful you made me feel
And how what we had felt so real
But as time and distance became our enemy
We were forced to say farewell
And leave fate the power to tell
With hearing the clock’s tick-tocks
I recollect memories of you
And bracelets in a box.
Copyright ©
cuddlytiger17
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2004-10-10 22:59:04]
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Re: Bracelets In A Box
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 11:03:48 PM AEST
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| This seems kind of sad but great write. |
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Re: Bracelets In A Box
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by PumpkinPie on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 11:29:09 PM AEST
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Well done, I love your title,
PumpkinPie |
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Re: Bracelets In A Box
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 11:30:26 PM AEST
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| this was another great write. now i am not one for rhyming, but you displayed this talent well here. i really enjoyed this poem |
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Re: Bracelets In A Box
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by SkaterGirl16 on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 11:40:14 PM AEST
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| You have a talent for rhyming poetry, which I think is VERY hard to do. ^_^ |
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Re: Bracelets In A Box
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by Kitty_cat on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 10:09:11 AM AEST
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| that was really amazing...wow, u have a brilliant talent. i love your descriptions, its really good, and the line 'bracelets in a box' is really clever, i think. well done |
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